Out Ioway

My help comes from the Lord,
the Maker of Heaven and earth,
He will not let your foot slip-
He who watches over you will not slumber.
-Psalms 121:2,3

 
The ProgenyArdithSharonJasonDerek

Tuesday, January 08, 2008

By Nolan

Here's a little story Nolan wrote before breakfast this morning. Most of it, that is. I had to temporarily halt the flow of creative juices so as to get some nourishment into his gullet, but like the truly great writer/artists, not even a bowl of Crispy Rice could detain him for long.

It's supposed to be "about Bambi, but different..."









("blacket" = "blanket")

You will notice that there might be a few spelling and punctuation issues that need addressing, but overall, I thought he stuck with his storyline and method of writing--subjectus introductus abruptus-- rather well.

Most books are far too long, anyway.

Remember, when you homeschool there are few chances to show off 'los workos des kiddos' in an institutional setting.

But Ma will not be deterred.
 

1 Comments:

Blogger tank said...

I like how Thumper was replaced by Thunder. I also like how the deer reconciled with the humans in the end. That's very deep.

1/09/2008 06:14:00 AM  

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